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Redeeming Christmas by Carol James

 

Blurb:

Novelist Olivia St. Madeleine is intrigued by a handsome and mysterious stranger she sees when she's Christmas shopping. Who exactly is he, and what is his story?

 

Gabriel Winter definitely has a story. One he's been running from for years. He's renovating a house next door to a friendly and persuasive grandmother, who is, unbeknownst to him, Olivia's Nana.

 

Through Nana's insistence, Liv helps Gabe wallpaper and paint, and in return Gabe fulfills one of Liv's secret childhood dreams.

 

But past hurts and secrets threaten to drive them apart rather than draw them together.

 

Will they find the courage to share their secrets with each other and with God, and allow Him to redeem Christmas?

 

Excerpt:

Liv picked up the Pa-rum-pa-pum-pum Peppermint lotion from the seasonal display. Turning the bottle over, she pretended to read the back label, but she focused her attention on the male customer in the center of the store.

            The salesgirl stuck to him like a piece of chewing gum on the sole of a shoe in summer. Gooey and annoying.

            Liv couldnā€™t blame her, though. He was tall with dark brown hair, meticulously combed back from his forehead. His olive skin enhanced his cleft chin. He wore a charcoal gray wool suit with a white shirt, a red and navy striped tie, and black wingtip shoes. Maybe he was an attorney.

            Common sense told Liv to make her purchase and leave. Intrigue argued she should browse and gather more information. As ā€œJingle Bellsā€ played over the speaker system, she ignored common sense and crept closer to observe.

            His brown eyes studied every move the clerk made, as if he were considering her as possible dating material. But that made no sense. Esscential Scents was a womenā€™s store. Why would he be sizing up one woman while he was shopping for another?

            Because he wasnā€™t shopping. A policeman. Maybe he was an undercover cop posing as an attorney, trying to sneak some information out of the salesgirl. No, that couldnā€™t be right, either. So far, the sales clerk had done all the talking. But then again, the best investigators were good listeners.

            Miss Bubblegum rested a hand on his forearm while she gestured toward the mountainous display of home and body products in the center of the store. ā€œAnd this is our most popular fragrance, Scent-uous. A wonderful choice to pamper that special lady in your life.ā€

            The man slowly stepped away and crossed his arms over his chest. ā€œWell, Iā€”ā€

            The salesgirl turned and gestured toward the right-hand wall. ā€œOr what about these? Air and Sun. Part of our new Earth Esscentials, all-natural collection. Very popular among the professional crowd.ā€

            His gaze focused on the clerk. In silence, he nodded.

            Liv recognized the look of panic in the girlā€™s eyes. When she was in college, sheā€™d worked on commission in a clothing store. The clerk knew she was losing the sale. But what she didnā€™t know was that she wasnā€™t losing anything. Because it wasnā€™t a real sale.

            The girl turned toward the other side of the store. ā€œOr how aboutā€¦ā€

            Or a secret agent. Maybe he was a secret agent whoā€™d ducked into the store to avoid the men who were following him, and he had no intention of buying anything. He was simply hiding. Liv glanced back over her shoulder. No fishy characters lurked outside the store entrance. But of course, professional spies looked just like a next-door neighbor. Nothing suspicious about them.

            James Bond spoke, minus the British accent, ā€œHey, thanks for your help, but I think Iā€™d just like to browse a littleā€¦if thatā€™s OK.ā€

            ā€œOh, sure. Of course. Enjoy looking around. Iā€™m Candy, if you need anything.ā€

            And who would she be if he didnā€™t need anything?

            ā€œThanks, Candy. I appreciate your time.ā€

            As the chime signaled the arrival of a new customer, a new male customer, Candy dropped 007 like a sun-scorched rock and scooted across the store toward the entry.

            The spy wandered through the tables toward the display framed by evergreen garland and white twinkling lights on the left wall. His jacket was cut full enough to hide his shoulder holster. He slid his hands into his pants pockets as he pretended to study the lotions and perfumes stacked to the ceiling.

            This was her chance. Liv strolled up beside him. ā€œOverwhelming, isnā€™t it?ā€

            He turned toward her. His brow wrinkled in surprise, and then a smile lit his face. "Sure is. Must be over a hundred different choices.ā€

            Curiosity fluttered her stomach. Sheā€™d get to the bottom of this. ā€œSo, are you shopping for anyone in particular?ā€

ā€œA friend.ā€

ā€œI see. A good friend?ā€

            He pursed his lips and looked far away as he constructed his cover story. He leaned his head to the side. ā€œNot yet. But Iā€™m working on it.ā€

            A vague response.

            She nodded. ā€œAge?ā€

            ā€œMine?ā€ He raised his eyebrows and grinned.

            Trying to distract her with humor. A good ploy. ā€œNo, your lady friend.ā€

            ā€œWhoa, there. Iā€™ve learned never to try and guess a ladyā€™s age.ā€

            Slick. ā€œI can suggest some general scents that would be popular with most women, but if you could give me a ballpark age, I can point you toward some that might be more appropriate.ā€ She picked up a bottle of shower gel from the display in front of them. ā€œFor instance, this Cotton Candy scent would not go over well with a mature woman.ā€

            As he removed his hands from his pockets, his brown eyes sparkled. ā€œYouā€™re right. OK. Seventy. Ish.ā€

            ā€œSeventy? Ish? Really?ā€

            He nodded.

            ā€œThen thisā€ā€”she returned the Cotton Candy gel to the displayā€”ā€œwould be completely wrong. What you want is a classic scent.ā€ She led him across the showroom to the back corner. Liv gestured toward the left side of the display like a gameshow hostess. ā€œLavender. In fact, thatā€™s why I came into the store. To buy some as a Christmas gift for my grandmother.ā€ She grasped the tester and spritzed some of the perfume onto a card. Then she waved it through the air for him to smell. ā€œMy nana loves it.ā€

            He smiled. ā€œSoft and old-fashioned. Classic.ā€

            ā€œThis next one, Texas Rose, is my nanaā€™s second favorite.ā€

            He followed her farther back, ā€œDo you work here?ā€

            ā€œMe? No. Iā€™m just a customer.ā€

            ā€œWell, maybe you should,ā€ he muttered.

            Whether he intended her to hear it or not, she caught his barely audible response. Sheā€™d pretend she hadnā€™t heard him to give him a chance to elaborate. ā€œPardon?ā€

            ā€œSorry. Just thinking out loud. Thanks so much. Youā€™ve been very helpful, and I donā€™t want to keep you from your shopping.ā€

            She was dismissed. Sheā€™d failed in her mission. ā€œYouā€™re welcome. Enjoy.ā€ She grasped a floral travel bag filled with an array of Luscious Lavender products and headed toward the register. Once she paid, her Christmas shopping would be completed.

~*~

            Liv perched on the wrought-iron cafe chair outside the mall coffee shop and sipped her peppermint mocha. Her journal lay open on the table before her. This had been the last available spot, but she couldnā€™t have chosen a better one. Its placement was perfect for people-watching. A sea of mankind surged up and down the mall corridors. She loved shopping this time of year. Trips to the mall offered plenty of material for work.

            A young father, most likely, with two preschool children nibbling on cookies sat a few tables over. Heā€™d probably picked them up from daycare and brought them here to shop for a surprise Christmas gift for their mother. The cookies were bribery to ensure their silence.

            Or perhaps he was a widower. This was the first Christmas after his wife had died. He was fighting to overcome past memories and make this season joyous for his children. But it was hard. Painful. How could he hold everything together? Livā€™s eyes burned as tears threatened. The little girl had her motherā€™s blonde hair and blueā€”

            ā€œHello, again.ā€

            Liv jumped at the greeting. Sheā€™d been so lost in thought that she hadnā€™t noticed the attorney-cop-spy now standing beside her table. He held a paper cup from the coffee shop in one hand and a large shopping bag from Esscential Scents in the other.

            ā€œHi. Well, looks like you found something.ā€

            ā€œI did. Thanks to you and your guidance.ā€ He scanned the seating area.

            She looked again too. Still no empty tables. A captive audience could produce an abundance of information. "Please, wonā€™t you have a seat?ā€

            ā€œThanks.ā€

            As he sat and placed his package on the concrete floor beside his chair, his suit coat fluttered open. No shoulder holster after all. His gun must be jammed in his waistband behind his back or in an ankle holster.

            "Iā€™m Gabe.ā€

            She grasped his offered handā€”his smooth, well-manicured offered hand. Secret agenting must pay well. ā€Liv. Nice to meet you.ā€ She nodded toward his shopping bag. ā€œSo what did you decide on?ā€

            ā€œI went with the lavender.ā€

            ā€œGood choice.ā€

            His gaze rested on her open journal. ā€œLooks like you might be in the middle of something.ā€

            ā€œPeople-watching. The journalā€™s in case I observe something I need to record.ā€

            As he sipped his coffee, his chocolate eyes sparkled. ā€œPrivate detective?ā€ He grinned.

            She returned his smile. ā€œWriter.ā€

            ā€œReally? Have anything published?ā€

            ā€œA few novels.ā€

            ā€œAnything I might have heard of?ā€

            ā€œI doubt it. No offense, but youā€™re not exactly my target audience. I write romance.ā€

            ā€œOh, so I get it. Men arenā€™t romantic.ā€                      

            ā€œMy heroes are very romantic.ā€

            ā€œBut not real men.ā€

            ā€œLetā€™s just say romance is not the genre of choice for most ā€˜realā€™ men. Action, sci-fi, mystery. Stuff like that. But a smart man could learn an awful lot about women by reading a romance novel or two.ā€

            ā€œIā€™ll keep that in mind.ā€ He nodded. He pulled his phone out of his pocket and glanced at the display. ā€œDuty calls.ā€

            Definitely an undercover cop.

            He inserted his hand into his inner jacket pocket and extracted a business card. He held it out to her. ā€œIn case you ever want to change careers and go into sales, my companyā€™s always looking for good people. From what I saw earlier, youā€™d be quite a success.ā€

            She studied his card. Gabriel Winter, CEO, Sales Solutions, Placing people in perfect places. ā€œYour busy season, huh?ā€

            ā€œNot really. The last thing my customers want to see this time of year is some sales rep coming in to take them away from their buying customers.ā€

            She winked. ā€œI meant your name.ā€

            ā€œOh. That.ā€ Smile lines radiated from his eyes. ā€œMost people donā€™t even catch it, but of course you would. Your lifeā€™s all about words.ā€ He stood. ā€œWould you happen to have one of your cards on you?ā€

            She reached into the side pocket of her purse, withdrew a business card, and offered it to him.

            He studied the rose and gray rectangle. ā€œOlivia St. Madeleine, Novelist, Creating Beauty from Ashes.ā€ As he raised his eyebrows, his gaze met hers. ā€œYou were destined to be a romance writer from birth. Your parents chose the perfect name.ā€

            ā€œActually, my agent did. My real nameā€™s Olivia Slootsky. Donā€™t get me wrong. Itā€™s a fine name, but I ask you, whoā€™s going to believe a person with that last name writes romances?ā€

            He chuckled. ā€œWell, Olivia St. Madeleine Slootsky, thanks again. Running into you has been the best part of my day. Have a happy holiday.ā€

            As he turned and walked toward the exit door, she reached for her journal and her pen. His mahogany eyes blazed with merriment. The warmth of his smile sent delicious shivers down her spine.

 My Review: When Livy and Gabe meet at the perfume counter neither expect what comes next. With secrets to hide and trouble brewing this story will give you something to ponder and keep the pages turning. 

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Carol James is an author of inspirational fiction. She enjoys creating Redemptive Romance. She lives in a small town outside of Atlanta, Georgia with her husband, Jim, and a perky Jack Russell "Terrorist," Zoe.

 

Having always loved intriguing stories with happy endings, she was moved to begin writing to encourage others as she'd been encouraged by the works of other authors of inspirational fiction.

 

Her debut novel, Rescuing Faith, has been an Amazon number one best-seller.

 

Carol enjoys spending time with her husband, children, and grandchildren, traveling with friends, and serving in the production department at her church. And most days, in the late hours of the night or the wee hours of the morning, she can be found bringing her newest novel to life.

 

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Questions:

1.      Why this book? What inspired you to write it?

            I have always loved the Christmas season. For me and my family, the holiday has always been a time of joy and celebration. But I know that for many the weeks and days surrounding Christmas are filled with memories of failure and loss. In writing Redeeming Christmas, I wanted to show that no failure, no loss is beyond Godā€™s redemption. We have only to offer them, and He promises He will redeem them.

                       

2. What is your favourite Christmas carol/song and why?

I canā€™t pick only one. I can narrow it down to two that I love equally.

Lo! How a Rose Ere Blooming -  I love this because not only does it have beautiful words, but the harmonies are exquisite and fun to sing a cappella. Almost madrigal-like.

My other favorite is Joy to the World! The lyrics and music resound with pure joy at Christā€™s birth. And shouldnā€™t all creation sing?

 

3. What is the best Christmas present you ever received and who was it from?

The very best Christmas present I ever received was from my husband. He gave it to me on Christmas Eve in 1970, and I still have it today. My engagement ring.


Comments

Carol James saidā€¦
Thanks so much for hosting me and Redeeming Christmas on your blog today.
Pamela S Thibodeaux saidā€¦
Sounds like a lovely story, Carol
Good luck and God's blessings
PamT
LoRee Peery saidā€¦
I look forward to reading your story, Carol.
Carol James saidā€¦
Pam and LoRee, thank you both for the encouragement.
marilyn leach saidā€¦
Carol, thanks for making your story available and letting us know about your favorite Christmas gift-engagement ring. Hard to beat that! Cheers
Carol James saidā€¦
Marilyn, thanks for commenting. I still have that ring almost 50 years later.

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