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Cinderella. What comes after The End. Or Three months after the happy ever after


Three months after the happy ever after

So Cinderella married Prince Charming and they all lived happily ever after. The End.

Three months after the wedding, Cinderella sat in the dining room of the palace. Alone. Again. Her husband, Prince Charming, or Albert as he now insisted on being called, had left at the crack of dawn to go hunting.  This time it was for deer. The previous day it had been hare and the day before that... She couldnā€™t even remember the day before that. The three weeks previously, he had been touring the country for some charity or other playing polo. In fact she couldnā€™t even remember the last time he had had breakfast with her.

She tapped her fingers on the table trying to think. Oh, the honeymoon, that was it. They had spent two weeks on the beach, walking hand in hand on the sand, sleeping under the stars, doing things couples in love did on their honeymoon.

The thing was, as soon as they got back to the castle things changed. Albert threw himself back into his life there, the hunting and riding and fishing and affairs of state. It turned out he really ran the country and not his father King Wilberforce. Not that that was a problem, as Cinderella knew that he would end up doing it anyway, she just hadnā€™t envisaged it been so soon.

Oh, and the polo. Sheā€™d dare not forget the polo. She was beginning to think he loved his horses more than he did her. Maybe he married her simply to avoid the arranged marriage his parents wanted.

She finished her breakfast and wondered what she should do today. She was tired of sitting on a chair trying to read or sew or do what princesses did all day long. Which apparently was nothing. Actually, she corrected herself that was Nothing. Nothing, nothing, nothing. Maybe she should go down to the kitchen and make herself useful. She could make dinner perhaps. She picked up her plate and cup and headed through the double doors at the end of the room.

There was a shriek and a crash as something was dropped then hastily picked up. ā€œYour Highness,ā€ the voice said. ā€œI was just coming to get those.ā€

ā€œItā€™s alright I have them. I need to go to the kitchen anyway.ā€

ā€œOh... you canā€™t go to the kitchen. Cookā€™s in a right tizzy and the place is a mess and...ā€

ā€œThen it sounds like she needs the help.ā€ Cinderella handed her cup and plate to the servant and picking up her skirts ran to the kitchen. She laughed to herself over what Queen Gertrude would say if she saw her running. Well too bad. She was in a rebellious mood this morning. She pushed open the kitchen door and stood there watching. Tizzy was not the word. Chaos was more like it.

Smoke billowed from one of the ovens. Flour covered every available work surface and the floor. The sink was piled high with burnt or dirty pans and dishes and Cook was screaming at the top of her voice.

Cinderella coughed loudly and silence descended like a stone.

ā€œYour Highness,ā€ Cook spluttered. ā€œWhat are you doing here?ā€

ā€œI came to help,ā€ Cinderella said. She grabbed one of the aprons and tied it on before Cook could say another word. ā€œAnd it looks like you need it.ā€ She moved over to the window and flung it open. ā€œGet the door open too. Let some of this smoke out.ā€ She turned noticing the kitchen staff just standing there. ā€œDo it!ā€ she said putting her hands on her hips.

ā€œYou heard Her Highness,ā€ Cook said. She clapped her hands. ā€œMove!ā€

The door was flung open along with the rest of the windows. Cinderella nodded in approval. ā€œRight Cook. What can I do to help?ā€

ā€œOh I couldnā€™t ask you to do anything...ā€

ā€œYou didnā€™t ask. I am offering, nay insisting on helping. If I have to spend another hour sat in that solar on my own reading I will go spare. I know kitchen work. Let me help.... besides the more of us there are the sooner itā€™s done right.ā€

Cook nodded. ā€œEspecially with this ball tonight in your honour.ā€

Cinderella nodded. She had actually deliberately forgotten about it but wasnā€™t going to say as much. It had been dubbed the ā€˜letā€™s show off the new princess to the surrounding kingdomsā€™ ball by the King which had put her right off the idea from the outset. She looked at the table where the pastry was going horribly wrong. ā€œMay I?ā€ she asked.

Cook nodded. ā€œI can never get pastry right.ā€ She watched in amazement as Cinderella turned the mess in front of her into 28 perfectly formed apple pastries. ā€œHow did you?ā€ she asked.

Cinderella smiled. ā€œPractise,ā€ she said quietly. ā€œMaybe we could trade tips sometime. I love your beef casseroles but can never get the meat tender enough.ā€

Cook smiled. ā€œSounds good to me.ā€

Cinderella wiped her hands on her apron. ā€œNow... do you want me to do the meringues?ā€

ā€œIf you donā€™t mind Highness. Then I can get on with the roast.ā€

Twenty minutes later Cinderella finished the meringues. ā€œNow Cook what can I do? The sink or the oven?ā€

"Either ... Maā€™am,ā€ Cook finished awkwardly. She dreaded to think what Queen Gertrude would say. Even Prince Albert was likely to be annoyed about this. But Cook wasnā€™t about to argue with royalty. She valued her job too much.

Cinderella moved over to the oven dropping to her knees and pulling out the shelves.

By the time the oven was clean and spotless two hours had passed. Cinderella was covered in soot and ash and dirt. Her blonde hair was dark and her face had black streaks on it. She had hummed as she worked, happy to be doing something other than reading or being alone.

The rest of the day flew past. She was rearranging the shelves in the larder, when a bellowing voice behind her made her jump.

ā€œCINDERELLA! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING?ā€

She took a deep breath and turned round wiping her hands on her apron. ā€œAlbert,ā€ she said blushing under the dirt covering her face. ā€œI was cleaning the oven.ā€

He moved over to her. ā€œHave you any idea what the time is?! Outside. Now.ā€ His tone was curt leaving no doubt that she should obey.

She took a deep breath and removing her apron followed her husband into the garden. The air was cool after the heat of the kitchen. She turned to him. ā€œHave you quite finished ordering me around like a scullery maid?ā€

He put his hands on his hips and glared at her. ā€œIs that not who I am speaking to?ā€ he said sharply. ā€œLook at you... youā€™re, youā€™re filthy!ā€

She looked down at herself. ā€œItā€™ll wash out. Whatā€™s the problem?ā€

ā€œProblem?ā€ He yelled. Then he took a deep breath and lowered his voice. ā€œThe problem, my dear Elle, is you seem to have forgotten who you now are. You no longer work in the kitchen.ā€

Cinderellaā€™s eyes narrowed. ā€œNo I donā€™t do I?ā€

ā€œSo do I have to remind you of what the wife of the heir apparent does?ā€

ā€œFeel free!ā€ she snapped. ā€œNo actually let me tell You what the wife of the heir apparent does all day long. She gets up ā€“ Alone. She has breakfast ā€“ Alone. Then she retires to the solar where she sits Alone all day long with her book. Sometimes she does cross stitching. Other times, if it is not raining, she takes a walk around the palace gardens. Alone. Then finally its dinner time. In a huge hall where no one speaks except to say pass the salt please. Then she sits alone again in her room until itā€™s time to go to bed.ā€

He looked at her. ā€œAnd your point is?ā€

She shook her head. ā€œDo I have to spell it out for you? I. Married. You! Not your palace or the solar or the book I seem to spend more time with. I have not eaten with you in days. The last time we had breakfast together was on our honeymoon. These days you spend more time with your horses and polo ponies than you do me.ā€

He huffed. ā€œYou donā€™t ride.ā€

ā€œYou never asked! How do you know what I do or do not like doing?ā€

ā€œFine!ā€ He turned round and faced across the palace garden. ā€œWhat do you like doing then?ā€

ā€œI cook,ā€ she said decisively.

ā€œCook!?ā€ Albert spluttered. ā€œThatā€™s what servants do.ā€

She glared at him. ā€œI cook and I sing and I ride,ā€ she said. ā€œAnd if I want to do so then I will.ā€

ā€œAnd you clean,ā€ he said looking at her.

ā€œAnd clean!ā€ she finished. ā€œCome here.ā€ She grabbed his hand and dragged him into the kitchen. She broke off a corner of one of the meringues she had made. ā€œHere.ā€ She shoved it in his mouth. ā€œI made this.ā€

Not expecting it he nevertheless ate it. ā€œWow. You made this?ā€ he repeated reaching for the rest of it.

Cook nodded. ā€œShe did Sir. And the pastries and she helped with other bits too. Sheā€™s gifted with her cooking if you donā€™t mind me saying so.ā€

Albert looked at Cinderella. ā€œDoesnā€™t mean you can keep doing it though.ā€

She shook her head and stormed out of the kitchen. She picked up her skirts and ran through the main door into the corridor which led to the ballroom.

ā€œWait!ā€ he called knowing full well the guests were already arriving which was why he had come to find her in the first place. Although the kitchen was the last place he had looked. Indeed it had been the last place he had thought to look, having expected her to have more sense than be there. He set off after her, calling her name over and over.

Cinderella ignored him. She didnā€™t want another lecture. Not from someone who had barely spoken to her in days. She ran fast not paying attention to where she was going. She suddenly burst through a door into a room full of people in wigs and ball gowns. ā€œOh,ā€ she gasped sliding to a halt but not before she crashed into someone sending them both crashing to the floor.

The person turned over and scowled at her. ā€œAnd who are you?ā€ he asked.

King Wilberforce hurried over to them. ā€œHerbert, I am terribly sorry,ā€ he said, offering the man a hand to get up. Then he looked down at the scruffy woman by his feet. ā€œAnd you young lady can go and pack your bags.ā€

Cinderella snorted. ā€œCertainly. Iā€™ll go do it now, Father.ā€ She pulled herself upright.

King Wilberforce looked at her. ā€œElle?ā€ he asked looking at her closely. ā€œWhat are you doing girl? You are filthy!ā€

ā€œWhat was I doing? Working actually. I cleaned the oven, did the dishes, rearranged the cupboards in the pantry...ā€

Albert ran in behind them, pulling himself up short. ā€œFather,ā€ he said. He looked at his wife and then at his father. ā€œThere was a problem with something in the kitchen and Elle was sorting it out. Sheā€™s a hands-on person and decided to show them what to do.ā€

Wilberforce looked shocked. ā€œA princess working in the kitchen?ā€ he spluttered.

Albert nodded. ā€œShe helped cook tonightā€™s banquet,ā€ he said proudly. ā€œMy wife is an excellent cook. Now if you will excuse us, we need to go and change.ā€ He wrapped an arm round his wifeā€™s waist and led her from the room.

Cinderella looked at him. ā€œDid you mean that?ā€ she said quietly.

He looked at her. ā€œItā€™s the truth. You are an excellent cook. Now the question is are you just as good a rider?ā€

ā€œYouā€™ll never know,ā€ she said. ā€œIā€™ve been told to pack my bags and leave.ā€

Albert laughed. ā€œOh well. Been nice knowing you.ā€

A cough came from behind them. They turned to find Queen Gertrude standing there. ā€œDonā€™t pack,ā€ she smiled. ā€œHeā€™ll get over it. He told me to do the same thing once, when he found me actually daring to clean the bath myself.ā€ She looked at them. ā€œWe have wronged you by not allowing you more freedom to do what you want.ā€ Then she looked at her son. ā€œAnd you have been neglecting your wife. She should not be spending so much time alone! When was the last time you actually spent any time together?ā€

Albert looked at his wife and then down. ā€œI donā€™t know.ā€

Cinderella rolled her eyes. ā€œFour weeks, twelve hours, thirty six minutes and counting,ā€ she muttered.

Gertrude looked at them. ā€œYou do realise that if you want a happy ever after you have to work at it,ā€ she said wryly. ā€œIt doesnā€™t just happen the way it does in books. Now go, spend some time together, finishing the fight and making up. Then we will see you, properly attired in an hour or so for dinner.ā€

The young couple nodded and Albert slid a hand into that of his wife. ā€œYouā€™re a mess!ā€ he told her as he led her to the stairs.

ā€œAt least I donā€™t look like a dressed up puppet,ā€ she shot back.

They started up the long winding staircase made of marble.

ā€œYouā€™re the one who got caught sliding down these banisters last week.ā€

ā€œAnd youā€™d know how? Youā€™re never here!ā€ She paused then looked at him. ā€œBut at least I donā€™t wear tights and think they are breeches.ā€

ā€œMine donā€™t have ladders in,ā€ he retorted.

ā€œHuh!ā€ she hissed. ā€œWell at least mine fit!ā€

He glanced down. ā€œYeah well. Not my fault if they shrunk in the wash. Least they are clean.ā€

She scowled. ā€œIā€™d like to see you clean an oven and not get dirty.ā€

He pushed her into the bedroom and shut the door behind them, shoving a chair under the handle. ā€œHave you finished?ā€

She shook her head. ā€œNo. You leave the lid off the toothpaste, the loo seat up, your shoes in the middle of the floor...ā€ She broke off as he clamped his lips firmly onto hers. When he finally broke the kiss she looked at him. ā€œAnd your kissing needs practicing.ā€

He smiled at her. ā€œDoes it? You need a bath.ā€

ā€œSo go run me a bath then,ā€ she whispered. ā€œAnd maybe you could join me. After all you do stink of horses.ā€

Albert smiled. ā€œMaybe tomorrow we both will,ā€ he said. ā€œAssuming you can fit me into your busy Alone Schedule.ā€

ā€œI think I can do that,ā€ Cinderella said.

ā€œGood,ā€ he said kissing her again and sweeping her into his arms. ā€œBecause we have a happy ever after to work on.ā€ He carried her into the bathroom, shutting the door firmly behind them.

The End

Comments

Mary Manners saidā€¦
Very cool, Clare. I LOVE it! You are a bright light in my day. God bless you!
Tanya Stowe saidā€¦
Too much fun, Clare!
LoRee Peery saidā€¦
Oh, Clare. I hope we can meet in person some day -- may be in heaven, but I know I will treasure the day. Great take! I've heard of rewriting fairy tales, but never entertained the thought to try. Think I'd go for the Grimm's....oh, that's been done on TV.
Jo saidā€¦
It's perfect! What a fun story.
Love it!So much fun, and so true.
Donna B saidā€¦
LOL! I couldn't stop smiling! This is great! I guess happily ever after does have it's ups and downs!
Marianne Evans saidā€¦
Great job, Clare!! What fun!! :-D God bless, and keep shining!!
Pamela S Thibodeaux saidā€¦
Yes, Yes, Yes! Love it!!

And so true....

Great job Clare.

PamT

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